Last Hope: Complete (Unedited)

This one needs a bit of work, but it's complete and I'd love to know what you think of it!

Last Hope is very much pulp-inspired. I was really trying to invoke the spirit of a mid-40’s style SF story. It’s very space opera-y. I conceived and wrote this. Joshua is going to go in and do some edits on it soon, but I’m curious what you guys think of it right now!

Here is the link.

(Ed. - This is Joshua. I do all the compiling, so I’m sorry if I mess…